DeviantART and Wacom are proud to present the second Intuos4 "Bring Your Vision To Life" contest! Open to all artists all over the world, we challenge you to show us your dreams and aspirations for the future. Get drawing!
Artist's Comments
Colour version of A Rocky Start [link]
Port Macquarie, Flynns Beach Comments
Hey, this is awesome!
Very nice view! Peaceful colors! Great job! -- I'm part of: *PhotomanipulatorClub =natures-beauty-club *Photographic-Club |
Details
April 20
4.1 MB 91.5 KB 900×600 StatisticsCamera Data
Canon
Canon EOS 5D 1/83 second F/8.0 16 mm 50 Apr 19, 2009, 6:03:22 AM |
Critiques
the composition is also nice, the centered rock doesn't deter from the image by making it look to balanced because the detail is spread out to compentsate. also the contrast between the rocks in the water and the plain beach really helps give this shot dynamism as well as depth.
however, there is one thing about this shot which nigh ruins the shot, a problem we all know: dynamic range. there is almost no detail in the rocks, they are simply pure black, the same goes for the trees on the left. not sure if you have a tripod, but if you do you could've blended multiple exposures in PS to achieve a much better shot. there is a second slight problem, and that is light fall of. it is most noticable to the left, which is a lot darker than te rest of the immage. this might have been solvable with a simple masked curves/levels/brightness layer.
those two things are what gave the low technique rating, and reduced the impact.
originality is normal, but the vision this shot show is just great.
Composition is interesting and nice to see a shot that draws the eye directly to the centre, leading lines from the rocks and the clouds. Flouting the rule of thirds works very well here.
Is this an HDR composite or simply a great one off exposure. Would love to know more about your workflow here as well. Off to look at the black and white version of this but cant imagine it having the same impact at all
Previous PageNext PageThank you for your Critique
You are not logged in.