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Critiques
1. While I think obstruction of the house is fine, I think the tree limbs covering the front porch makes it a little uncomfortable and detracts from what the viewer knows is open space beyond.
2. The bush at the base of the tree in the foreground, which doesn't strike me as too terribly important, is stealing attention from the house which is the main subject matter.
My suggestion for a stronger composition is that maybe "On Top of the World" is too open and "Hold Me In Your Arms" has too much going on...and maybe instead of choosing to shoot immediately behind these trees or completing avoiding it is to shoot more among the trees. Again, very difficult, but I think it's possible with your gifted eye and trusty wide angle! One of my problems as a photographer is that sometimes I forget there's more than the overall charm of the scene and maybe it's worthwhile to take a couple steps forwards and be part of the scene than just analyzing it from a distance. To your credit, I believe you did that here, but still feel there's more hidden potential to be discovered.
The whole image is stunning and keeps drawing me back to it. I like the use of the framing with the tree branches. The detail that you have shown throughout the whole image is exquisite. The colours and saturation look true to life. The subject really appeals to me and reminds of how far Australia has come in such a short time.
I would be quite happy to have a large size print of this in my home.
My only suggestion for a possible improvement would be if you had taken a step or two to the right which may have improved the composition a touch by showing a bit more of the hut.
Overall I think that it is a great shot and one of your best.
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